Active and Authentic:
A Theory of Teaching Writing
Cassandra Shott
Dr. Hall ENG110-72
April 21, 2005
Draft 3
Introduction
As a young teacher-in-training,
I have spent many nights hashing ideas and theories out in my mind. There is so much research and theory out in the world
already; it seems that the big challenge is to synthesize it into a cohesive theory. This semester I have been exposed to
a very large variety of literature on the subject of teaching children to read and write. I was quite surprised to find that
a great deal of it was in agreement with long standing feelings I already had on the subject. The idea of teaching children
as people first, with real feelings and needs, has always been my guiding light through my work both in and out of the classroom.
With this primary concept in my head, I will propose a personal theory of teaching and learning. A theory that combines research,
current best practices in the field and most importantly, the concept of educating the child as a whole person, not merely
a number to push through the system.
There are so many labels
available to describe various theories of education. Most of my life I have been wary of these labels, however, because of
their lasting power to shape the policies that they are attached to. I came across a very moving article while skimming through
Talking Points, which dealt with the labeling of teaching theory. It changed my outlook on the idea of labels and how
they are used to define practice. Curt Dudley-Marling states that labels are indeed important, if only because they “build
solidarity” (15). He also makes the point that we must “worry about who’s doing the names and for what purpose”
(14). As a response to this I will label my theory from the start, so as not to have others label it for me. I would consider
the bulk of my theory to be whole language, with small deviations here and there. I am for learning in a meaningful context,
with active and authentic learning as my battle-cry. While the term whole language may hold different political meanings for
different people, to me this is whole language in a nutshell.
Definitions
No discussion of theory
would be complete without outlining the terms involved and what they mean to me personally. In my opinion two of the most
commonly confused terms used in educational theory are education and literacy. Everyone has a different definition of what
education is or what it means to be literate. The two concepts are separate, one can be educated yet illiterate, or decode
text without being able to think critically about what they have read. We must provide distinct definitions for the two concepts.
Merriam-Webster defines education as “the process of developing morally, mentally, or aesthetically by means of instruction”. This definition is very open ended, leaving much of the definition up to the purpose
behind education, rather than education itself. Without a purpose, education can mean nothing. We must determine for ourselves
what morals, ideas, and aesthetics we will teach our students. John Mayher powerfully sums up the purpose of education --
to “develop [the students’] full potential as language users to a level of critical literacy” (45). This
purpose leads us to yet another problem however. What exactly is “critical literacy”?
The definition of literacy
has been expanding year by year. It can no longer just mean the mechanics of decoding print. To be truly literate takes much
more than this, especially in complicated industrial nations such as the United States. Critical literacy moves
beyond the mechanics of print and includes the ability to reflect and synthesize information. Reading is the “process of meaning-making” (Mahyer 222), which in itself alludes
to much more than sounding out words and stringing together sentences. All of the decoding skills in the world will get a
person nowhere if they do not know how to make sense of what they have decoded. The ability to relate what is being read to
background experiences and personal feelings is an important component of critical literacy as well.
We now live in a period
of text transformation. Just as when people switched from oral traditions to a writing system or when Gutenberg invented his
printing press. The Internet and hypertext technology are changing the way people read and gather information. This too plays
a part in the ever-changing definition of literacy. The power and influence of technology on education cannot be underestimated
or ignored for much longer. Regie Routman notes that we are “not teaching our students how to interpret, evaluate, analyze,
and apply knowledge for Information Age learning,” (6). I strongly agreed with this statement and seek to remedy this
situation. New technologies challenge our tried and true modes of linear print, they “make it possible to combine textual,
visual, and verbal elements into new modes of communication that rival the printed word” (Hammerberg 207). Children are constantly being exposed to these new forms of text and we as teachers must equip them with
the knowledge they need to utilize this new technology for their own future benefit. Reading
and writing in hypertext require a new literacy, one which is non-linear and much more demanding in many cases that print
based texts. According to Nancy Patterson, “hypertext reading requires the reader to make deliberate decisions about
which path to take within a hypertext,” (77). For the writer this means that they must give up some of their control
of the text. The piece will not be read exactly as intended by the author; each reader makes their own way through the hypertext.
This new technology flips much of what we have learned about reading and writing on its head. The definition of literacy is
changing before our eyes and within our classrooms.
Classroom Environment
Imagine walking into a
classroom brimming with books of all kinds, students working in small groups or reading intently in corners. Imagine this
space humming with energy and exhilaration, where children are excited to come to school each day and the teacher does not
look like she could use two extra summer vacations. Impossible you say? This dream can become a reality, given the right environment.
The classroom environment includes not just the walls of the room, but also the students, supplies, and philosophy that fill
it. Hillocks contends that “teaching creates environments to induce and
support active learning of complex strategies that students are not capable of using on their own” (55). These environments
must be caring and supportive of student voice, always encouraging discussion and creativity.
I view the classroom as
a social community. Mayher discusses this idea in depth, understanding that “learning
is as much a collaborative social process as it is an individual one” (105). To view learning in this light gives us
a new perspective for approaching teaching and learning. The idea of the classroom as a social community has strong implications
for all areas of study, but influences writing pedagogy perhaps most of all. Writing is a communicative art. Though people
can and do write for their own fulfillment, such as in a diary, students will more commonly be writing for the expressed purpose
of communicating ideas to others. This social community can be taken one step further and become a community of authors. The
“conception of learning to write as an ever-evolving and ongoing process of participation in a community of authors,”
is very motivating (Larson 91). As teachers we must create an environment for active learning and ownership of text. This
can teach all children that they are authors and that an author is not just an elite position they can never attain.
Katherine Schultz studied this idea of the classroom community and found that “the social interactions that shape
and are shaped by writing are critical to our understanding of writing curricula” (389). We cannot create writing curricula
in a vacuum, if children and their interactions are not at the forefront of our process, than how can we expect to ever keep
them engaged. Schultz also found that “writing occurred throughout the day and was embedded in nearly every aspect of
classroom life” (385). This can be a powerful and meaningful way to encourage students to write. Letters, journals and
creative stories are all forms of writing which should be equally valued in the classroom. Adults write with purpose, not
for a grade. Why should we be expecting success from children who are writing for the opposite reason? Are we teaching them
that writing is a hollow activity that they will be able to ignore once they make it through their mandatory schooling? We
must teach children that writing can be used in every day life and that it can and must have real purpose.
How can we create this community? I believe that it must start with the teacher’s heart. The teacher must open
up and create a classroom that is warm and loving. The process of writing opens people up and most are not willing to do this
unless they are positive that they and their work will be accepted and viewed as important. I believe that classroom discussion
is a vital part of creating this type of environment. Student meetings where real issues are openly dealt with are very useful
and can be a great opportunity for bringing children closer together and creating the support system that so many of them
need. In these meeting the teacher should model how to share feelings and concerns, as well as how to respond to the concerns
and feelings of others. Starting with this basic activity can be a strong foundation for a writing community.
My idea of this writing community includes a classroom that is bright and open. It may seem silly, but I think that
fresh air is a good place to start. I think that many classrooms are far to cluttered to be real workspaces, which is the
true purpose of a classroom. The children should be comfortable and feel at home, so as to maximize their learning. “Children
are and have always been powerful learners out of school,” (Mahyer 61) we should be capitalizing on this fact and trying
to make our classrooms more like the real world. I believe that this even includes the decoration of the room. I can see a
Kindergarten classroom broken up into functional areas, a reading corner complete with couches and lamps, a dramatic play
area with real dishes and silverware, plenty of open space for learning and working, and a bright rug for stories, singing,
and getting together to build a community. I also believe that a high quality classroom environment includes a great deal
of time out of the classroom. Taking field trips to see new things and gain new experiences to learn and write about or simply
being outside and investigating. Environment makes a huge difference in learning, whether you are working with 5 year-olds
or 15 year-olds.
Role of the Teacher
It may seem to some that
the teacher does not have a role in this new classroom. In my view the teacher’s role has only grown from the tradition
idea of a teacher as the transmitters of knowledge (Mahyer 19) to the idea of a teacher as a guide. The teacher’s role
then “is to coach and prompt, to ask questions that push the edges of student ideas, and to sustain the interchange
among students” (Hillocks 65). If this is to be our role as teachers, than
it becomes easy to see how complex it actually is. Often, classrooms such as the one I have described above seem rather chaotic
and it is easy for an observer to confuse this with the idea that the teacher is doing nothing. However, in a classroom where
lessons are taught in context and children are guided through discovery, the planning is immense. Not only must the teacher
plan lessons and themes out in steps so that children may be guided through discovery, but they are “always improvising,
always creating a climate for learning through the art of teaching” (Mahyer 8). I see three main traits that must exist
in a great teacher: passion, reflection, and creativity.
“Passion is contagious,”
(Harvey 12) and it is a contagion that we want to spread.
Teachers are models for the children in their classroom and modeling passion is an easy task that can evoke a great response
from students. Sharing your passions means sharing yourself. By sharing our passions with our students we can “share
the learning struggle with them” (Harvey 53) as well.
If we open up and share ourselves, it becomes more likely that our students will feel safe in sharing their passions. If they
open up, then we will also have to listen and have the students themselves become our passion. Joanne Larson conducted a study
of Maryrita Maier, whose “students knew her likes, dislikes, and life passions and she knew all of theirs,” this
is a perfect example of a passionate teacher (75). If a teacher is to be a role model, they must let students see them as
human beings, complete with the passions and struggles that make us who we are.
The ability to reflect
upon one’s own actions is a powerful tool for developing as both an educator and a person. Routman notes that “constant
self-monitoring and self-evaluating [is what] excellent teachers do” (36) As a student I find myself doing this all
of the time, I have to because I am still trying to figure out the best way of going about things in the classroom. It is
my belief that when teachers stop doing this, they stop learning. Teachers who are not still learning themselves are not modeling
positive behaviors to their students. Education is a life long affair; we must demonstrate this in all of our actions to our
children. A reflective teacher looks back upon the day and reevaluates their actions, they view the classroom as a laboratory
of sorts. I believe that this is absolutely true, educators should be constantly researching, our subjects are so easy to
come by and we are able to observe them all day, each day. There is no better way to learn about how children learn than to
simply keep your eyes wide open and your mind questioning while in a classroom, whether you are leading the lesson or just
there to watch.
To be able to reflect upon our teaching processes, we must become dedicated and meticulous observers of ourselves,
our students, and the relationships in our classrooms. We can begin this process by being “teachers who listen to [our]
students and observe what they can and cannot do in classroom discussions, in dealing with texts, in writing, and so forth”
(Hillocks 61). These daily observations take place in between all of the time spent on mandatory state tests and go beyond
a simple measure of whether the children can answer a, b, or c. This observation can teach us about how the children in our
class go about solving problems both in the text book and on the playground, how they react to change and new ideas, and even
catch that exact moment when the last piece clicks in and the child is excited over understanding a new concept. From these
observations and mental notes it becomes more possible to see what is working on our classroom and what is not. It is my belief that a lock-and-step curriculum is not a good fit for all children. It takes this observation
and reflection to mold the curriculum each year to the individuals of the classroom, rather then molding the students to fit
the curriculum. A teacher who reflects “will analyze a new idea in light of its appropriateness to the students and
their present knowledge…and its probability of success” (Hillocks 37). This implies that not only do we have to
become aware of the characteristics of each individual in our classroom, but also be sensitive to which methods of learning
they are comfortable with and come up with new ideas to reach all of these differences.
Creativity leads the way
in classrooms where children are actively learning and teachers are practicing reflective teaching. New ideas and unique teaching
methods are required each day in a classroom where a teacher is passionate and reflective. It takes great creativity to develop
new ideas and approaches to be tested in the classroom setting. These new approaches are then reflected on by the teacher
who can then either toss them or refine them so that the process of teaching is constantly evolving and moving forward. Anne
Dyson notes that “learning to write involves work of the imagination on the part of both children and teachers,”
(397) meaning that it is as much our part as teachers to find ways of reaching the students as it is their job as students
to be active and receptive. Some think of teaching as a science, with sure-fire methods that can be memorized, while others
think of it as an art. I agree with John Mayher, it “combines knowing and doing, technical knowledge and artistry”
(9). Good teaching does take a vast amount of technical knowledge; however no amount of study can provide a teacher with passion,
reflection and creativity – these we must develop within our selves, as a sort of personal quest without an end.
In today’s rapidly
changing society, I believe that teachers must add yet another facet to themselves and their role in the educational system.
Politics. Routman remarks that “we educators must have more influence with our communities, school boards, state legislatures
and government before there is a problem” (34). To often teachers wait until the problem has overtaken them before someone
gets the power to speak out against it. It is vital to the future of curriculum and education that teachers become political
about the issues that really matter. I am not talking about salary increases or benefit cuts, which seem to have teachers
running to public meetings, but real issues like instructional methods, curriculum problems, and standardized testing. Routman
is correct in her assessment that we need to beat these problems to the punch. I believe that the best way to do this is to
become vocal about the god things that are happening in our schools. By emphasizing the positive, people are more likely to
listen to you when you have something negative to point out. I know my local education reporter on a first name basis, I would
recommend that all teachers try to do the same thing. I attend board meetings and I am not a teacher, nor do I have children
in the local district yet. I will be both someday and I understand that there are changes that need to happen now. I feel
that political action is important to teachers because we are encouraging our students to do the same. The call for active
learning must be accompanied by a call for active teachers, I plan to be among the voices of the few, rather than the silence
of the many.
Role of the Student
My goal is a student-centered
classroom and curriculum, so the student’s role is very important. I really like Mayher’s view of the student
as an “initiator and questioner” (77). They play a large part in curriculum planning as the teacher and are a
great resource for new ideas and inspiration. This means that not only do we, as teachers have to be great listeners, but
also that we need our students to want to share with us. I have outlined above an environment which encourages students to
speak and share. To accomplish this ideal we must provide students with materials to get them interested and thinking. I agree
with Mayher’s assertion that students will “express their own puzzles and problems with a text they are sufficiently
intrigued with to want to understand it better” (226). It is when students are interested and asking questions that
the real process of student action and therefore, student-teacher transaction takes place. Students must be provided with
a wide variety of options and materials. With this available to them, students can “determine their own purposes and
topics”(Schultz 387). Once students do this, teachers can help them explore and develop. When “student ideas remain
the focus of attention,” (Hillocks 65) then classrooms are active and engaging. This is exactly the way that we want
them to be.
A student must be confident
in order to succeed in school, and more importantly, in life. It is my belief that children are confident from birth and it
is through the work of adults that this confidence either dissipates or grows. We must do all that we can to build confident
learners who trust themselves to answer questions and speak up when they need to. This confidence can be built in classrooms
by allowing children “become their own experts” (Mayher 188) and encourage children to seek each other out as
“important resources in the quest for knowledge” (Harvey
20). We can make them feel proud that they found the solution to a problem by themselves, rather then being spoon fed grammar
exercises from a text book. The confidence to raise your hand in class to answer or ask a question is a quality that will
continue to be important for students throughout their academic careers and even further into their lives. Parents and teachers
seem to pay much more careful attention to younger students then they do older students. Children are expected to either sink
or swim as they move into high school and beyond. Confidence and the knowledge that they deserve a good education will keep
them from falling between the cracks of our school system. No one pays attention to whether you are reading your texts in
high school and college; you have to be willing to fight for your education. Confidence goes a long way in education. Mayher
states that “learners are, finally, responsible for their own learning” (105). In order to keep them fighting
for their education beyond the walls and safety net of elementary school, we need to provide them with the opportunity to
build the confidence they need to know that they deserve a great education and will settle for no less.
Assessment
I feel that a section dedicated
to assessment is necessary because it is both the beginning and the end of my teaching process. Assessment is vital for both
the formation of lessons and the review of them. Education is a process that never ends, so how can there be a final exam?
I view education as a cyclical process. We assess to decide what to teach, and then we assess to find out how much of what
we taught has been acquired by the students, which in turn tells us what to teach next. McNair, et al. define formative assessment
as “a daily, ongoing approach involving checking with all students about what they know and what they are interested
in. It also includes an understanding of students’ misconception or incomplete understanding and an identification of
their learning strengths and styles” (25). This is a powerful tool for a classroom teacher. I believe that assessment
cannot be done simply once or twice a year and then forgotten about until the test scores come back. Observation is a powerful
way to assess students on a daily basis, it allows the teacher to reflect on their teaching methods and see what the students
are learning at the same time. A major assumption that too many educators make is that “students learn what teachers
teach” (Mahyer 57), in my experiences as a teacher’s assistant I know that this is not true. Formative assessment
through observing and talking with the students can serve as a way to ensure that students are learning something, if they
are not then the teaching approach must be reworked. It is far better to catch this early and often, rather than to get to
the end of the year and realize that your students did not learn what you thought they did.
Authentic assessment is
also very important to my theory of teaching. “Authentic assessment allows teachers to align curriculum and instruction
and tailor it to the needs of individual children” (McNair et al. 24), this is important to me because it links back
to my idea of the student as an individual. Standardized tests are necessary due to political stress for accountability, however
this does not mean that teachers are limited to these tests in their classrooms. There are many forms of authentic assessment
and I feel that one of the most powerful is the student portfolio. “Portfolio assessment judges students’ ability
to apply knowledge,” (Barootchi 281) which is the true measure of understanding in my view. Portofolios are also useful
in helping students learn to set goals and meet them, for the vital part of a portfolio is that the individual “demonstrate[s]
progress in pursuing their goals” (Barootchi 286). This provides students with lifelong metacognitive skills that will
carry them far in life. I plan on using portfolios in combination with observation and other authentic measures to reflect
on my teaching skills and methods as well as my students learning processes and achievements.
Implications
The theory of learning
and teaching I have set forth has several important implications for the classroom. These implications also serve as a framework
for building curriculum and social relations among students and teachers. At the heart of this theory is the impact of learning
in context. The idea of learning in context rules out the use of workbooks and vocabulary drills. Instead we make learning
authentic and do not try to separate knowledge from its use. Vocabulary, spelling, and grammar are all around us, we use it
them in real ways on a daily basis, so let us show this to our students. Handwriting and spelling are important, but why not
tell children the real reason why, “so they can take pride in their work” (Routmann 113). Vocabulary drills and
worksheets only show learners pieces of a giant puzzle. They could spend years trying to piece it all together only to find
out that they have been working toward the wrong shape. Mayher tells us that “unless the learner can clearly see the
connection between the part and the whole, practicing the part is likely to be either useless… or even counterproductive”
(85). Now show these same learners the picture of the puzzle they are working on. All of a sudden the pieces begin to click
into place. Only when knowledge is given a context does it truly become useful. This context includes showing children how
language and writing relate to other fields of knowledge such as math and science, or the arts and physical education. Curriculum
integration is a wonderful way to provide children with a context for learning.
Most people perform much
better when they have a purpose that they care about. Children are the same way. Routman
makes a powerful point, “children learn best when curriculum is personally meaningful and relevant to their lives”
(42). This is where the idea of authentic, and therefore, meaningful learning comes in. Children do feel passionately about
things when given a chance. When they are given opportunities to write for various audiences and not just for a grade, excitement
ensues. Publishing and sharing their stories can also work wonders. Adults do not often write for a grade, but rather with
a purpose. Schultz has a powerful point when she states that “any attempt, such as a workbook exercise, to isolate language
from a meaningful context will result in a simulation of writing rather then in authentic writing” (387). Children need
a chance to have a voice and write to powerful people. They also need a chance to be recognized in their won right as author
sand share their work with others for praise from their peers instead of grades from the teacher.
An important part of my
theory is the idea that students are the center of a classroom. This means that we must focus “on student learning rather
than on teaching” (Mayher 215). Though this idea seems to flip the whole science of education on its head, the change
is a rather obvious one. We were all students once and we can all think of a time where we were utterly confused. Thinking
back to that event, was the material confusing? Or just the way it was being explained? For me it was most often the approach
that was being used to present the information of the fact that the information was not really being explained at all, just
presented. If we can concentrate on how students are learning and provide them with the supplies and experiences that they
need, we can begin to function as a guide for their explorations. Humans are “active meaning makers,” (Mayher
79) so why should we just treat students as empty vessels to pour ever increasing amounts of decontextualized, memorizable
information into? There is a great “need for active discussion of ideas and language” (Hillocks 7) in our classrooms,
students need to be able to voice their questions and get the answers they need not from the back of a workbook but from hashing
it out with each other and discovering new ideas as they go.
Opposing Views
Not all people are in agreement
on teaching theory. If they were discussion would not be held and perhaps progress would not be made. It is important to look
at the points of contention some people may have for the theory of teaching that I have outlined above. Classrooms as I outlined
in the section above on learning environment can be quite a handful to keep up with and often look like chaos to the casual
observer. Nothing could be further from the truth, however. There is a place for defined rules in the theory that I am advocating.
The main difference is that rather then the rules being posted on the first day of class based on what a teacher has needed
in classes prior, the rules are negotiated between teachers and students throughout the year. After short discussion regarding
incidents that occur in the classroom, the children and teacher can post rules that they decide upon. These rules can be added
to or taken from as the year progress. The evolutionary nature of discipline in a classroom is important to my theory, as
it places more responsibility on the children for their own behavior and helps to build a community within the classroom.
Just as reflective teaching is fundamental, reflective classroom management must be utilized. Rules needed one year may not
be needed during the next year and we must be open enough to see this.
Some teachers and parents
take great comfort in having stacks of student work done in spelling books or upon worksheet after worksheet on grammar. Active
and authentic learning requires no such skill and drill learning and can be somewhat disconcerting to unfamiliar eyes. I have
found that even kindergarten parents expect their child to come home with a workbook for homework and page after page of coloring
sheets on the letter “a”. This expectation is hard to meet when children are writing in journals for the teacher
to read or sending the letters that they write to interested parties around the nation. A clear way to deal with this problem
is to make your theories known at the beginning of the year and to keep parents involved throughout. Routman makes an important
point, “if we are [] clear about our goals and purposes – as well as responsive to the parents of the children
we serve – most parents are very supportive of our practices and the changes we are attempting” (73). Letters
home once a week accompanied with suggestions for extending learning at home can be a great substitute for weekly homework
assignments out of a workbook. Lots of active learning can and does take place in the home, so let us combine the force of
the school and home environments and share the curriculum. There are ways of meeting the need of parents and administrators
to have hard copies of student work that allow them to see the evolution of their children’s skills as writers. Writing
workshop is a great way of producing published books written by the students to send home and read.
Assessment is a third major
issue when arguing for a learning theory. The opposing viewpoint to my theory would be, how then do we measure student achievement?
If standardized bubble sheets are not the answer, then what is? My proposition is periodic portfolio review of student work
instead of standardized tests. Portfolios can be created to show a large variety of student work and ability as well as be
used to show student progression over time. These portfolios can even be given numerical grades if needed to satisfy the public’s
need for numbers. Portfolio review cuts down on the stresses associated with testing and allows students to choose what aspects
of their performance to show. Some children need to have several drafts of a paper before they arrive at a completed project,
it is not fair to take this process away from them and require an essay written in an hour. I believe that children are far
smarter than any standardized test can handle if we just give them a chance to shine.
Conclusion
In this essay I have argued
for a whole language based theory of teaching writing. This is a theory based on a substantial body of research. Real research,
conducted in classrooms across the nation. Some people see whole language as being too lenient and even wishy-washy at times.
I do not believe that this is the case. As I have outlined in this essay, I am a whole language teacher and I hold very high
ideals and standards for my students. The main difference in my opinion is that rather than having me as the leader and the
students as followers, I view education as a journey we are embarking on together. We need to learn how to become a team and
work together so that they can learn the skills that they need to be successful in life. My definition of success goes beyond
the ability to make money in a career. It includes becoming a well-rounded person who can and does read and write for both
pleasure and purpose. With a goal like this, how can educators go wrong?
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Active and Authentic:
A Theory of Teaching Writing
Cassandra Shott
Dr. Hall ENG110-72
March 25, 2005
Draft 2
Introduction
As a young teacher-in-training,
I have spent many nights hashing ideas and theories out in my mind. There is so much research and theory out in the world
already, it seems that the big challenge is to synthesize it into a cohesive theory. This semester I have been exposed to a very large variety of literature on the
subject of teaching children to read and write. I was quite surprised to find that a great deal of it was in agreement with
long standing feelings I already had on the subject. The idea of teaching children as people first, with real feelings and
needs, has always been my guiding light through my work both in and out of the classroom. With this primary concept in my
head, I will propose a personal theory of teaching and learning. A theory that combines research, current best practices in
the field and most importantly, the concept of educating the child as a whole person, not merely a number to push through
the system.
There are so many labels
available to describe various theories of education. Most of my life I have been wary of these labels, however, because of
their lasting power to shape the policies that they are attached to. I came across a very moving article while skimming through
Talking Points, which dealt with the labeling of teaching theory. It changed my outlook on the idea of labels and how
they are used to define practice. Curt Dudley-Marling states that labels are indeed important, if only because they “build
solidarity” (p. 15). He also makes the point that we must “worry about who’s doing the
names and for what purpose” (p. 14). As a response to
this I will label my theory from the start, so as not to have others label it for me. I would consider the bulk of my theory to be whole language, with
small deviations here and there. I am for learning in a meaningful context, with active and authentic learning as my battle-cry.
While the term whole language may hold different political meanings for different people, to me this is whole language
in a nutshell.
Definitions
No discussion of theory
would be complete without outlining the terms involved and what they mean to me personally. In my opinion two of the most
commonly confused terms used in educational theory are education and literacy. Everyone has a different definition of what
education is or what it means to be literate. Merriam-Webster defines education as “the process of developing
morally, mentally, or aesthetically by means of instruction”. This definition
is very open ended, leaving much of the definition up to the purpose behind education, rather then education itself. Without a purpose, education can mean nothing, we
must determine for ourselves what morals, ideas, and aesthetics we will teach our students. John Mayher powerfully sums up
the purpose of education -- to “develop [the students’] full potential as language users to a level of critical
literacy” (p. 45). This purpose leads us to yet another problem however. What exactly is “critical literacy”?
The definition of literacy has been expanding year by year. It can no longer
just mean the mechanics of decoding print. To be truly literate takes much more than this, especially in complicated industrial
nations such as the United States. Critical
literacy moves beyond the mechanics of print and includes the ability to reflect and synthesize information. Reading is the “process of meaning-making” (Mahyer, p.222), which in itself alludes
to much more than sounding out words and stringing together sentences. All of the decoding skills in the world will get a
person nowhere if they do not know how to make sense of what they have decoded. The ability to relate what is being read to
background experiences and personal feelings is an important component of critical literacy as well.
We now live in a period
of text transformation. Just as when people switched from oral traditions to a writing system or when Gutenberg invented his
printing press. The Internet and hypertext technology are changing the way people read and gather information. This too plays
a part in the ever-changing definition of literacy. The power and influence of technology on education cannot be underestimated
or ignored for much longer. These new technologies challenge our trued and true modes of linear print, they “make it
possible to combine textual, visual, and verbal elements into new modes of communication that rival the printed word”
(Hammerberg, p. 207). Children are constantly being exposed to these new forms
of text and we as teachers must equip them with the knowledge they need to utilize this new technology for their own future
benefit. Reading and writing in hypertext require a new literacy,
one which is non-linear and much more demanding in many cases that print based texts. According to Nancy Patterson, “hypertext
reading requires the reader to make deliberate decisions about which path to take within a hypertext,” (p. 77). For
the writer this means that they must give up some of their control of the text. The piece will not be read exactly as intended
by the author; each reader makes their own way through the hypertext. This new technology flips much of what we have learned
about reading and writing on its head. The definition of literacy is changing before our eyes and within our classrooms.
Classroom Environment
Imagine walking into a
classroom brimming with books of all kinds, students working in small groups or reading intently in corners. Imagine this
space humming with energy and exhilaration, where children are excited to come to school each day and the teacher does not
look like she could use two extra summer vacations. Impossible you say? This dream can become a reality, given the right environment.
The classroom environment includes not just the walls of the room, but also the students, supplies, and philosophy that fill
it. Hillocks contends that “teaching creates environments to induce and
support active learning of complex strategies that students are not capable of using on their own” (55). These environments
must be caring and supportive of student voice, always encouraging discussion and creativity.
I view the classroom as
a social community. Mayher discusses this idea in depth, understanding that “learning
is as much a collaborative social process as it is an individual one” (p. 105). To view learning in this light gives
us a new perspective for approaching teaching and learning. The idea of the classroom as a social community has strong implications
for all areas of study, but influences writing pedagogy perhaps most of all. Writing is a communicative art. Though people
can and do write for their own fulfillment, such as in a diary, students will more commonly be writing for the expressed purpose
of communicating ideas to others. This social community can be taken one step further and become a community of authors. The
“conception of learning to write as an ever-evolving and ongoing process of participation in a community of authors,”
is very motivating (Larson, p. 91). As teachers we must create an environment for active learning and ownership of text. This
can teach all children that they are authors and that an author is not just an elite position they can never attain.
Katherine Schultz studied this idea of the classroom community and found that “the social interactions that shape
and are shaped by writing are critical to our understanding of writing curricula” (p. 389). We cannot create writing
curricula in a vacuum, if children and their interactions are not at the forefront of our process, than how can we expect
to ever keep them engaged. Schultz also found that “writing occurred throughout the day and was embedded in nearly every
aspect of classroom life” (p. 385). This can be a powerful and meaningful way to encourage students to write. Letters,
journals and creative stories are all forms of writing which should be equally valued in the classroom. Adults write with
purpose, not for a grade. Why should we be expecting success from children who are writing for the opposite reason? Are we
teaching them that writing is a hollow activity that they will be able to ignore once they make it through their mandatory
schooling? We must teach children that writing can be used in every day life and that it can and must have real purpose.
How can we create this community? I believe that it must start with the teacher’s heart. The teacher must open
up and create a classroom that is warm and loving. The process of writing opens people up and most are not willing to do this
unless they are positive that they and their work will be accepted and viewed as important. I believe that classroom discussion
is a vital part of creating this type of environment. Student meeting where real issues are openly dealt with are very useful
and can be a great opportunity for bringing children closer together and creating the support system that so many of them
need. In these meeting the teacher should model how to share feelings and concerns, as well as how to respond to the concerns
and feelings of others. Starting with this basic activity can be a strong foundation for a writing community.
Role of the Teacher
It may seem to some that
the teacher does not have a role in this new classroom. In my view the teacher’s role has only grown from the tradition
idea of a teacher as the transmitters of knowledge (Mahyer, p. 19) to the idea of a teacher as a guide. The teacher’s
role then “is to coach and prompt, to ask questions that push the edges of student ideas, and to sustain the interchange
among students” (Hillocks, p. 65). If this is to be our role as teachers,
than it becomes easy to see how complex it actually is. Often, classrooms such as the one I have described above seem rather
chaotic and it is easy for an observer to confuse this with the idea that the teacher is doing nothing. However, in a classroom
where lessons are taught in context and children are guided through discovery, the planning is immense. Not only must the
teacher plan lessons and themes out in steps so that children may be guided through discovery, but they are “always
improvising, always creating a climate for learning through the art of teaching” (Mahyer, p. 8). I see three main traits
that must exist in a great teacher: passion, reflection, and creativity.
“Passion is contagious,”
(Harvey, p.12) and it is a contagion that we want to spread.
Teachers are models for the children in their classroom and modeling passion is an easy task that can evoke a great response
from students. Sharing your passions means sharing yourself. By sharing our passions with our students we can “share
the learning struggle with them” (Harvey, p.53) as well.
If we open up and share ourselves, it becomes more likely that our students will feel safe in sharing their passions. If they
open up, then we will also have to listen and have the students themselves become our passion. Joanne Larson conducted a study
of Maryrita Maier, whose “students knew her likes, dislikes, and life passions and she knew all of theirs,” this
is a perfect example of a passionate teacher (p. 75). If a teacher is to be a role model, they must let students see them
as human beings, complete with the passions and struggles that make us who we are.
The ability to reflect upon one’s own actions is a powerful tool for developing as both
an educator and a person. To be able to reflect upon our teaching processes, we must become
dedicated and meticulous observers of ourselves, our students, and the relationships in our classrooms. We can begin this
process by being “teachers who listen to [our] students and observe what they can and cannot do in classroom discussions,
in dealing with texts, in writing, and so forth” (Hillocks,
p.61). These daily observations take place in between all of the time spent on mandatory state tests and go beyond
a simple measure of whether the children can answer a, b, or c. This observation can teach us about how the children in our
class go about solving problems both in the text book and on the playground, how they react to change and new ideas, and even
catch that exact moment when the last piece clicks in and the child is excited over understanding a new concept. From these
observations and mental notes it becomes more possible to see what is working on our classroom and what is not. It is my belief that a lock-and-step curriculum is not a good fit for all children. It takes this observation
and reflection to mold the curriculum each year to the individuals of the classroom, rather then molding the students to fit
the curriculum. A teacher who reflects “will analyze a new idea
in light of its appropriateness to the students and their present knowledge…and its probability of success” (Hillocks,
p. 37). This implies that not only do we have to become aware of the characteristics of each individual in our classroom,
but also be sensitive to which methods of learning they are comfortable with and come up with new ideas to reach all of these
differences.
Creativity leads the way
in classrooms where children are actively learning and teachers are practicing reflective teaching. New ideas and unique teaching
methods are required each day in a classroom where a teacher is passionate and reflective. It takes great creativity to develop
new ideas and approaches to be tested in the classroom setting. These new approaches are then reflected on by the teacher
who can then either toss them or refine them so that the process of teaching is constantly evolving and moving forward. Anne
Dyson notes that “learning to write involves work of the imagination on the part of both children and teachers,”
(p. 397) meaning that it is as much our part as teachers to find ways of reaching the students as it is their job as students
to be active and receptive. Some think of teaching as a science, with sure-fire methods that can be memorized, while others
think of it as an art. I agree with John Mayher, it “combines knowing and doing, technical knowledge and artistry”
(p. 9). Good teaching does take a vast amount of technical knowledge; however no amount of study can provide a teacher with
passion, reflection and creativity – these we must develop within our selves, as a sort of personal quest without an
end.
Role of the Student
My goal is a student-centered
classroom and curriculum, so the student’s role is very important. I really like Mayher’s view of the student
as an “initiator and questioner” (p. 77). They play a large part in curriculum planning as the teacher and are
a great resource for new ideas and inspiration. This means that not only do we, as teachers have to be great listeners, but
also that we need our students to want to share with us. I have outlined above an environment which encourages students to
speak and share. To accomplish this ideal we must provide students with materials to get them interested and thinking. I agree
with Mayher’s assertion that students will “express their own puzzles and problems with a text they are sufficiently
intrigued with to want to understand it better “ (p. 226). It is when students are interested and asking questions that
the real process of student action and therefore, student-teacher transaction takes place. Students must be provided with
a wide variety of options and materials. With this available to them, students can “determine their own purposes and
topics”(Schultz, p. 387). Once students do this, teachers can help them explore and develop. When “student ideas
remain the focus of attention,” (Hillocks, p. 65) then classrooms are active and engaging. This is exactly the way that
we want them to be.
A student must be confident
in order to succeed in school, and more importantly, in life. It is my belief that children are confident from birth and it
is through the work of adults that this confidence either dissipates or grows. We must do all that we can to build confident
learners who trust themselves to answer questions and speak up when they need to. This confidence can be built in classrooms
by allowing children “become their own experts” (Mayher, p. 188) and encourage children to seek each other out
as “important resources in the quest for knowledge” (Harvey, p. 20). We can make them feel proud that they found
the solution to a problem by themselves, rather then being spoon fed grammar exercises from a text book. The confidence to
raise your hand in class to answer or ask a question is a quality that will continue to be important for students throughout
their academic careers and even further into their lives. Parents and teachers seem to pay much more careful attention to
younger students then they do older students. Children are expected to either sink or swim as they move into high school and
beyond. Confidence and the knowledge that they deserve a good education will keep them from falling between the cracks of
our school system. No one pays attention to whether you are reading your texts in high school and college; you have to be
willing to fight for your education. Confidence goes a long way in education. Mayher states that “learners are, finally,
responsible for their own learning” (p. 105). In order to keep them fighting for their education beyond the walls and
safety net of elementary school, we need to provide them with the opportunity to build the confidence they need to know that
they deserve a great education and will settle for no less.
Implications
The theory of learning
and teaching I have set forth has several important implications for the classroom. These implications also serve as a framework
for building curriculum and social relations among students and teachers. At the heart of this theory is the impact of learning
in context. The idea of learning in context rules out the use of workbooks and vocabulary drills. Instead we make learning
authentic and do not try to separate knowledge from its use. Vocabulary drills and worksheets only show learners pieces of
a giant puzzle. They could spend years trying to piece it all together only to find out that they have been working toward
the wrong shape. Mayher tells us that “unless the learner can clearly see the connection between the part and the whole,
practicing the part is likely to be either useless… or even counterproductive” (p. 85). Now show these same learners
the picture of the puzzle they are working on. All of a sudden the pieces begin to click into place. Only when knowledge is
given a context does it truly become useful. This context includes showing children how language and writing relate to other
fields of knowledge such as math and science, or the arts and physical education. Curriculum integration is a wonderful way
to provide children with a context for learning.
Most people perform much
better when they have a purpose that they care about. Children are the same way. This is where the idea of authentic, and
therefore, meaningful learning comes in. Children do feel passionately about things when given a chance. When they are given
opportunities to write for various audiences and not just for a grade, excitement ensues. Publishing and sharing their stories
can also work wonders. Adults do not often write for a grade, but rather with a purpose. Schultz has a powerful point when
she states that “any attempt, such as a workbook exercise, to isolate language from a meaningful context will result
in a simulation of writing rather then in authentic writing. Children need a chance to have a voice and write to powerful
people. They also need a chance to be recognized in their won right as author sand share their work with others for praise
from their peers instead of grades from the teacher.
An important part of my
theory is the idea that students are the center of a classroom. This means that we must focus “on student learning rather
than on teaching” (Mayher, p. 215). Though this idea seems to flip the whole science of education on its head, the change
is a rather obvious one. We were all students once and we can all think of a time where we were utterly confused. Thinking
back to that event, was the material confusing? Or just the way it was being explained? For me it was most often the approach
that was being used to present the information of the fact that the information was not really being explained at all, just
presented. If we can concentrate on how students are learning and provide them with the supplies and experiences that they
need, we can begin to function as a guide for their explorations. Humans are “active meaning makers,” (Mayher,
p. 79) so why should we just treat students as empty vessels to pour ever increasing amounts of decontextualized, memorizable
information into? There is a great “need for active discussion of ideas and language” (Hillocks, p. 7) in our
classrooms, students need to be able to voice their questions and get the answers they need not from the back of a workbook
but from hashing it out with each other and discovering new ideas as they go.
Opposing Views
Not all people are in agreement
on teaching theory, if they were discussion would not be held
and perhaps progress would not be made. It is important to look at the points of contention some people may have for the theory
of teaching that I have outlined above. Classrooms as I outlined in the section above on learning environment can be quite
a handful to keep up with and often look like chaos to the casual observer. Nothing could be further from the truth, however.
There is a place from defined rules in the theory that I am advocating. The main difference is that
rather then the rules being posted on the first day of class based on what a teacher has needed in classes prior, the rules
are negotiated between teachers and students throughout the year. After short discussion regarding incidents that occur in
the classroom, the children and teacher can post rules that they decide upon. These rules can be added to or taken from as
the year progress. The evolutionary nature of discipline in a classroom is important to my theory, as it places more responsibility
on the children for their own behavior and helps to build a community within the classroom. Rules needed one year may not
be needed during the next year and we must be open enough to see this.
Some teachers and parents
take great comfort in having stacks of student work done in spelling books or upon worksheet after worksheet on grammar. Active
and authentic learning requires no such skill and drill learning and can be somewhat disconcerting to unfamiliar eyes. I have
found that even kindergarten parents expect their child to come home with a workbook for homework and page after page of coloring
sheets on the letter A. This expectation is hard to meet when
children are writing in journals for the teacher to read or sending the letters that they write to interested parties around
the nation. A clear way to deal with this problem is to make your theories know
at the beginning of the year and to keep parents involved throughout. Letters home once a week accompanied with suggestions for extending learning at
home can be a great substitute for weekly homework assignments out of a workbook. Lots of active learning can and does take
place in the home, so let us combine the force of the school and home environments and share the curriculum. There are ways
of meeting the need of parents and administrators to have hard copies of student work that allow them to see the evolution
of their children’s skills as writers. Writing workshop is a great way of producing published books written by the students
to send home and read.
Assessment is a third major
issue when arguing for a learning theory. The opposing viewpoint to my theory would be, how then do we measure student achievement?
If standardized bubble sheets are not the answer, then what is? My proposition is periodic portfolio review of student work instead of standardized tests. Portfolios can be created to show
a large variety of student work and ability as well as be used to show student progression over time. These portfolios can
even be given numerical grades if needed to satisfy the public’s need for numbers. Portfolio review cuts down on the
stresses associated with testing and allows students to choose what aspects of their performance to show. Some children need
to have several drafts of a paper before they arrive at a completed project, it is not fair to take this process away from
them and require an essay written in an hour. I believe that children are far smarter than any standardized test can handle
if we just give them a chance to shine.
Conclusion
In this essay I have argued
for a whole language based theory of teaching writing. This is a theory based on a substantial body of research. Real research,
conducted in classrooms across the nation. Some people see whole language as being too lenient and even wishy-washy at times.
I do not believe that this is the case. As I have outlined in this essay, I am a whole language teacher and I hold very high
ideals and standards for my students. The main difference in my opinion is that rather than having me as the leader and the
students as followers, I view education as a journey we are embarking on together. We need to learn how to become a team and
work together so that they can learn the skills that they need to be successful in life. My definition of success goes beyond
the ability to make money in a career. It includes becoming a well-rounded person who can and does read and write for both
pleasure and purpose. With a goal like this, how can educators go wrong?
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Peer
Review #1
Author: Amber Christensen
(achristensen3) |
Date: Wednesday, March
23, 2005 9:54pm |
Cassie,
I wanted to get your review
to you ASAP. Sorry it took me so long. Your paper was great and it was so hard to come up with any additions that needed to
be made. Hopefully the suggestions I did make will help!
1. Reread the assignment description: where in the
draft do you find the writer answering each requirement? Make at least 2 specific
suggestions for developing the essay further.
Cassie, I was so impressed
with your paper, especially since it¡¦s your first draft. It is amazing that you and I have chosen such similar topics/focuses
for our two major writing assignments.
The only thing I really
felt that was missing from your paper was any objections towards your theory. From the assignment guidelines: ¨Given your
audience, then, you will need to consider and address explicitly in your argument, its opposing views¨.
2. The purpose of Assignment 4 is to argue a case to a specific, carefully defined, oppositional
audience, for a well-developed theory of teaching and learning writing. Who is
the audience? What details in the essay demonstrate that the writer has fully
imagined its opposing views? If you were the audience for this piece, in what
additional ways might you challenge the writer’s ideas?
Like I stated before,
you really didn’t go into many critiques/oppositions of your theory. However, I am having a hard time with this part
of my paper too, seeing as I think that the theory is great! Some suggestions:
many people think of this type of classroom as unorganized, that it is too lenient, students shouldn’t be given so many
choices, etc.
3. Based on your understanding of the audience and its position,
what more might the writer
do in Draft 2 to persuade the audience that his or her theory is sound, resulting in effective teaching and learning?
This review is really
hard for me because I really feel like you touched on each aspect (besides the opposition) so fully. I feel as though you
have really brought in the appropriate quotes and worked them into your own theory seamlessly.
4. Suggest one or two examples of best practices in the writing Classroom, ones you’ve witnessed,
experienced, or imagined that might further serve to illustrate the connection between the writer’s theory and practice.
5. Examine the sources cited to support the writer’s theory:
do you find any references about which the writer seems confused, or maybe Just a bit sketchy? Suggest 2-3 additional specific textual references to help the writer build a stronger case.
Like I stated earlier,
I feel as though your quotes are well-chosen and thoughtful. I did find some quotes that I thought of while reading your paper:
(1) In your paragraph
on p. 8 about the student-centered classroom, you could incorporate Mayher’s quote about the commonsense students learning
through their previous school experiences that if they keep their mouths shut and fill in the blanks, little more will be
demanded of them, and little energy need be expended¨ (Mayher 180).
He also discusses this
idea on the previous page (p. 179) when talking about Dan Kelly’s class at Peninsula High and how they were content
to remain basically uninvolved in their classes¨. This might be useful when discussing the opposition’s view/ways of
teaching.
(2) There is a good quote/section
in Mayher’s book on p. 29 regarding how students schooling influences their adult capacities, attitudes, abilities,
and choices¨. This would be a great connection with your ideas in the first paragraph on
p. 5 about teaching children to write for real life situations and purposes.
(3) Although you
already have a good quote for the role of the teacher being a “transmitter of knowledge¨, I found another quote you
might be able to use. Again, from Mayher¡¦s book p. 188 when Mayher discusses with Dan Kelly about why he did not play a more
active role in the discussion groups. He replied that ¡§he had found that when he did so he inevitably became the expert to
whom the students could look for the ‘right answer¨. This really goes to show that the teacher can stand back and let
the students think and learn on their own. Most of the times, if the teacher lets the students discuss between themselves,
they come up with a great solution (and sometimes a different one than the teacher would have suggested).
Cassie, I loved reading
your paper. If you have any questions about my review, please email me or post so I can help some more! Hope this helps!
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Peer
Review #2
Message no. 1111 |
Author: April Brown
(abrown65) |
Date: Thursday, March
24, 2005 2:42pm |
1. Reread the assignment description: where in the
draft do you find the writer answering each requirement? Make at least two suggestions for developing the essay further.
You definitely answer
all the requirements. I like your section on the role of the student, and in fact am thinking about adding a similar section
to my 3rd draft. I don’t have any suggestions for you. I truly tried to find some, but your essay is VERY detailed and
meets all the requirements. I hope you take that as a compliment.
2. . The purpose of Assignment 4 is to argue a case
to a specific, carefully defined, oppositional audience, for a well-developed theory to teaching and learning writing. Who
is the audience? Those who believe in the “traditional” view of teaching. Such as assigning work book pages and
skill and drill repetitive exercises. What details in the essay demonstrate that the writer has fully imagined its opposing
views? The opposing view could probably stand out more. It’s an important part of your argument, so
try making a whole separate
section for it
3. Based
on your understanding of the audience and its position, what more might the writer do in Draft 2 to persuade the audience
that his or her theory is sound, resulting in effective teaching and learning?
I would be a little more
precise and give more examples. Your theory is great, but in order to fully understand it, I think more “teaching examples”
should be given. I also think that when you address opposing arguments for your theory, audience persuasion will occur as
well.
4. Suggest one or two examples of “best practices”
in the writing classroom – ones you’ve witnessed, experienced, or imagined – that might further serve to
illustrate the connection between the writer’s theory and practice.
Your theory relates very
much to the way my favorite teacher taught in our classroom. I don’t remember exactly what we learned, but I do remember
that she truly cared about our learning experience.
. Examine the sources
cited to support the writer’s theory: do you find any references about which the writer seems confused, or maybe just
a bit sketchy? Suggest 2-3 additional specific textual references to help the writer build a stronger case.
You have so many great
references.
Wonderful paper, very
inspirational.
April Brown
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Changes
I Made
The main problem that was
cited by both Amber and April was that I did not consider enough opposing views in my paper. The suggestion was made to add
an entire section devoted to this. I read in several other papers that people had done this and it did seem like a great Idea.
I had found that I had a hard time incorporating opposing views within other sections. I took this advice and added a new
section on opposing views. Amber offered several great quotes to use, but I felt as if I was bordering on too many quotes
as is, so I did not add them into my paper.
Comments from Dr. Hall Bravo . . . See
feedback within . . .
Changes I Made
I added several major sections,
such as a section on politics and the role of the teacher and a section on assessment. I added many quotes throughout the
piece to tie in new ideas from Literacy at the Crossroads and other research I
have found towards the end of class. To be honest, I did not add anything from the grammar readings because they are all still
muddled in my mind. I though that they were very confusing for the most part, but it may be because it is the end of the year
and my brain is fried. I also clarified my section on definitions, acknowledging the separate definitions of education and
literacy.
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